December 13, 2008

I need help with my English research paper?

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December 16, 2008

wish @ 2:39 am

I think it looks good, but in this sentence: Because of people like this, diet pills have become a multi-billion dollar industry.

Don’t start with because. Because of people like what? See what I mean?

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